Pay Attention: The Use of Second Person in…

[Joshua Lavender]

This poem came alive for me when I revised it from first into second person, and that told me where to take it:

https://www.stilljournal.net/joshua-lavender-poetry-weather.php

[Kathy Fish]

Wow, I love this, Joshua! Interesting how a change in pov can open up a piece. Well done.

[Graeme Outerbridge]

you what!^^

[Kay Rae Chomic]

Loved this, Kathy! That Lorrie Moore's excerpt charmed me:)

[Kathy Fish]

Thanks for stopping by, Kay!