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Jennifer Molidor's avatar

Great prompt thanks Kathy! I’ll get to work on this

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David Yourdon's avatar

Well, I just wrote a story about a hospital… and a turkey sandwich. Thank you for the prompt!

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Kathy Fish's avatar

Immediately drawn into this scene. Love a great line of dialogue like this: “I met the owner in a dream before I took this job,” she says. “That’s why this job is my fate.” This is a wonderful, surprising flash.

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Dorothy Dean Walton's avatar

Thank you! I am really enjoying your newsletter insights and tips, Kathy, really helpful. Hope to do more with this amazing form. Till soon, I hope, and here’s where I will soon publish my Café stories: https://www.dorothydeanwalton.com/

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Kathy Fish's avatar

Awesome concept! Love it, Dorothy!

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Jennifer Molidor's avatar

This was an interesting scene! I like the pepper twist.

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Dorothy Dean Walton's avatar

Thanks, Jennifer! I’m new to flash. But I hope to use it as much as possible in a blog I want to launch in May called Third Place Cafe Stories, all anecdotes in cafes. Do you write flash?

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Jennifer Molidor's avatar

I used to be a barista, I could give you some anecdotes!

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Dorothy Dean Walton's avatar

Hey, that would be fantastic. Loved the squeak of the merry go round that sounds like the hee haw of the donkey. Let me send you my website link with signup page for the blog. Just a sec, here it is: https://www.dorothydeanwalton.com/

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Jennifer Molidor's avatar

I’m just starting with this challenge. I e never done it before!

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Dorothy Dean Walton's avatar

We are in the same place, let’s keep working

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Kathy Fish's avatar

Did you post this under another thread as well? I wrote comments for it. I hope they weren't lost...

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